DRABBLE: "He Spoke Your Name..."

[jagnikjen.livejournal.com]

Title: “He Spoke Your Name...”
Author: JAGNikJen
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Characters: Robin, Marian
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I do not own Robin Hood, Robin, Much, et al. I have earned nothing but the pleasure that comes from the writing and the possibility of a nice comment or two.
Notes: None

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“He Spoke Your Name...”


Tossing and turning, shivering, sweating, dreaming...

A young girl with sparkling blue eyes, glossy brown curls, creamy skin.

A maiden with shining eyes, shy smiles, and dimples.

Endless summer afternoons, cool fall days, warm winter evenings.

Walking, riding, laughing.

Flowers, ribbons.

Arms, lips, curves. Embraces, kisses, realizations.

No longer a girl, but a woman.

Want. Desire. Lust. Love.

A question. An answer. A promise.

A king. A quest. A journey.

Honor. Glory.

A plea. Promises broken.

Anger, sadness, sharp words, tears.

Regrets. Hurt. Good bye.

Hunger. Thirst. Heat. Cold.

Pain. Wound. Longing. Home. Ache. Alone.

A whisper. “Marian...”

Comments

[queerlyobscure.livejournal.com]

Oooh. I really like the way you've written this. Almost like poetry (but the good kind, obviously) :)

[railise]

Wow. This is beautiful, and as Lace said, like poetry.

[omteddy2006.livejournal.com]

Wow. Nice composition. It's amazing how certain words, placed in a certain order, given a certain rhythm, can take on a larger meaning.

*applauds*

[dollysgirl04.livejournal.com]

Very good XD Poor Robin XD